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I have fallen,
into so many arms.
I have been given,
so many hearts.
I have been examined,
by so many eyes.
I have been complimented,
by so many mouths.
I have been desired,
by so many minds.
I have been,
yes I have been,
so many times.
But I have not been,
no, I have never been,
satisfied.

He slipped out of the woodwork,
a friendly face from my past.
He slipped out of the woodwork,
and shyly reached out to me.
He slipped out of the woodwork,
and fell in love with me.
He slipped out of the woodwork,
and satisfied me.
He slipped out of the woodwork,
a friendly face from my past.
He slipped out of the woodwork,
and rose above all of the rest.

When he slipped out of the woodwork,
I fell in love with him.
When I fell in love with him,
When I fell into his arms,
when I was given his heart,
examined by his eyes,
complimented by his words,
desired by his mind,
I was satisfied.
I am,
satisfied.
©2008-2009 ~ahmegamisama
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Author's Comments

I knew him about three years ago. For a long time we did not talk, and saw each other even less. We started talking again recently, and here we are.

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:iconcaller-of-storms:
Wow, lovely poem. I like how the repetition works for it! =)

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The Midnight Society-Have fun being evil
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:iconahmegamisama:
I'm glad, I was a little worried about the repetition, but I ultimately decided that I like it. I'm glad someone agrees. =) Thanks!

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"Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof." ~V
:iconcaller-of-storms:
Repetition should be used for time to time and it has a really powerful effect when used correctly, as you did here =)

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The Midnight Society-Have fun being evil
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:icondisheveledbeauty:
I'm so glad he makes you write such beautiful poetry.
:iconahmegamisama:
Me too. =)

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"Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof." ~V

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